Final Stage Edits

Final stage edits,
last chance to change,
kill your passion line by line,
close look at every word that could have been formed better,
clearer,
lovelier,
party with the negative voices in your head,
invitational critic,
hopes and dreams realized
or killed,
hanging on the edge of possibility,
future formed
by red pen.

© Christine Salkin Davis, 2018

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